Thank you doctor.Tim

 

In a happy town there lived a little, beautiful and a smart girl her name was Rose.

Everyone in the town liked her. Her teacher liked her. Her friends in the class liked her.

She was so brave, but one thing she was scared of was the doctor. It was like a nightmare to her.

One day her tooth was moving. Her mum saw it. She said “Your tooth is moving you need to visit Doctor Tim.”

Rose said “No! I am not going to go to the doctor.” Her mum said “Don’t worry it’s not so wobbly now.” That made Rose feel better.

After five weeks Rose had forgotten about her tooth but her mum didn’t. She checked her tooth again and it was wobbly, so she said “It’s time to visit Doctor Tim.”

Rose was scared but she had to do what her mum told her, so they went to see Doctor Tim. They had to wait in the waiting room.

When it was her turn her heart was bumping very fast. She went into Doctor Tim’s room. He was smiling she was scared from him. She sat on the chair.

Doctor Tim said “Close your eyes.” 

Rose closed her eyes but just before Doctor Tim starts, tears started coming down her eyes. But then she opened her eyes. She saw Doctor Tim holding her tooth

Rose smiled. Then Doctor Tim gave her a teddy bear and from that time Rose wasn’t scared from doctors any more.         

 

© Aya

Age 8

   

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